Righting A Wrong
þCut me loose
tell me no lies
I would do
anything
to go back
in time
I could make
everything right
Time goes on
life waits for no one
it’s time to grow up
Cut me loose
tell me the truth
I can see it your eyes
þCut me loose
tell me no lies
I would do
anything
to go back
in time
I could make
everything right
Time goes on
life waits for no one
it’s time to grow up
Cut me loose
tell me the truth
I can see it your eyes
Very nicely said. The last two stanzas are the best! Wish you the best of luck in submitting to that publication that asked for your work.
Thanks- I just need to find a long piece that has some merit- that’s the hard part. Everything I like no-one else likes- Ironic